Hey people I'm a new girl here and want to know your opinions.

I'm not thin skinned and I want you to be brutally honest.

Constructive criticism only please not insulting just for the hell of it, no one likes a Troll.

Selena

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Hey just seen this.

I think 68702 is fantstic and incredibly eerie! Great idea and concept, can't see much of you as the model but it is a cool shot.

68701 - Not so keen, I think the background is too bust and I don't like the colours clashing, lip colour hair and material draped on you are all clashing colours. Add to that the fabric draped on you covers your curves which makes you look wider and the side shadow on your nose also makes your nose look wider than it is. So I don't think this is a very flattering image.

68704 - Now looking at the one previous and this you would never have believed you had a body like this (just shows how unflattering the previous one is). Lovely shot, I love the silver droplets everywhere. I think this would look even better if the fabric you are laying on had been air brushed out so you looked like you were flying through the air, but that is just me.

68703 - Not keen on the angle again it makes you look wider than you are and I find I keep looking at the ring, for this shot I would have taken it off.

68705 - As with first one, very eerie, great concept but a shame on this one that there is something else in the background at the bottom, this should have been removed. I like the top half of your body shape here but you have not created any unusual angles with your legs which is a shame, I bet this looks better cropped from the waist up.

Thats my review I hope it helps!

M x

DragonLady , Digital Retoucher  posted on 08/02/2010 17:28:49   Posted 843 times

Located:London,London, UK
Member Since: 07/11/2008

Cheers for the feedback it's always good to hear other people's opinions :)

Although that's my engagement ring and that NEVER comes off :) I'm sure I'm not the only person like that :)

Anyway thank you :) x

Nice images but I'm afraid that I dont have a clear enough idea of what you look like to book you - assuming I was based in Hull of course. Model portfolios must have a minimum of a good clear headshot and a full-length body shot, if those 2 are covered fill the rest up with some nice arty pics - but without those 2 it isnt really a portfolio, just a pretty album of stuff you like.

The essential images should be unedited or very lightly edited, flatly lit and clearly indicate what you look like, what your skin is like and what shape you are. 

So, whilst you have some pictures that look nice - only 1 (no. 3) gives much of a clue of what a photographer may be booking. 

Hope that helps