looking for honest critique on my portfolio,bad or good dont mind as only way to improve is to know where your going wrong. thanks 
                          martin

HI

I'll give my view as a non photographer. 84128 i by far the best image because it looks the most pro shot. The others still have the amateur touch. I would concentrate on one type of lighting and master it. You have some indoor and out door shots which is great to show variety but none are yet near a pro standard.

So focus first on the more controlled environment of a studio, get a strong lit shot, deep shadows and work on getting the most flattering image of the model. Once you master the lighting then work on more creative shots like the out door themed one you have done, then move up to beauty head shots etc

Compare your current standard with that of say Scott Chappell and you'll see what I mean by someone who takes shots you cannot doubt are pro level.

That's my advice, hope it helps.

M

DragonLady , Digital Retoucher  posted on 04/01/2011 11:17:41   Posted 946 times

Located:London,London, UK
Member Since: 07/11/2008

thanks for your comments,
         i will try and get my lighting right and make the shots look more professional.as you say maybe concentrate on studio work first then location shots.
                           martin