Hi new unedited images,

First Wedding shoot and some lingerie shots.

Comments and feedback appreciated.

Keely :)

KeelyT

Hi Keelyt

The lingerie shot is OK but I don't think your pose has helped you. For lingerie you want to curve your body more and make more shape. It should be about the lingerie whereas in this image I feel the post is more suited to showing you. One is commercial and one is glamour, so I am left unsure which you were going for. The way this is shot says the aim was commercial lingerie, however the pose is the kind you'd expect if you were fully clothed and the legs are wrongly positioned. So I am left at a loss.

Have a look at some lingerie poses on the web and you'll see what I mean.

Another note on that image, big shadow under your neck, photographer has not cropped enough of the background out so you are not enough of the focus and the side light is too bright, it blows you out.

Good first attempt at lingerie but a lot of room for improvement.

I prefer the wedding shots but why would the photographer shoot these indoors on a black background? Not your fault I realise but it kills it for me. Lighting again is a tad flat. Poses wise though I think you did a good job, so on these ones its hard to judge as I think the photographer got it all wrong.

My advice, find a better photographer to work with.

That's my input

M

DragonLady , Digital Retoucher  posted on 29/07/2010 12:43:38   Posted 934 times

Located:London,London, UK
Member Since: 07/11/2008

Wedding is my aim, I want to focus on that style of shoot and want to gain more paid work in that area. Lingerie I am not as clued up about only 2nd ever shot I do recognise what you are saying though. I will upload some others, as I am hoping I understand what you mean and that I may have a couple that may have worked better.

KeelyT