Hello all,

I'm in the process of updating my portfolio - I'd be grateful for your constructive feedback on my current pictures - to give me some guidance as to what works best and to fill any gaps in my portfolio.

Thanks a million,

A xx

Hi,

I think 69064 should be portrait not landscape? Am I wrong?

60388 is ok but I think there is too much hair blowing around which is a shame and I am not keen on the cropping off of your hand in that, but otherwise an Ok shot.

I really like 69063, I think this is a good image for your port, nice clear head shot. Looks a lttle grainy but aside from that for me this is the best image in there,

69068, grainy again (this could be the way you are saving your files) but I like your face in this, the only shame is that by pulling the jacket forward on a side profile you have lost your figure. As a result you bum looks really pushed out when in fact it could just look that way because of the jacket hiding your shape.

69067, so grainy and I am not keen on the clothing, again it drapes down and hides your shape making you look like your body goes straight down. For me the female curves are needed for sexy shots and here they are hidden.

So my tips, increase the quality of the image uploaded to remove grainy ones, careful not to hide your figure in your next shots and be wary of your angles.

Hope that helps!

M x

DragonLady , Digital Retoucher  posted on 23/02/2010 00:39:25   Posted 934 times

Located:London,London, UK
Member Since: 07/11/2008

Thanks very much for your feedback.Kind regards,Alice

Hi Alice,

Your images are good 'starter' photos, you need to book shoots with different photographers to get a wide range in styles.

The expression in each photo is very similar, this should also be worked on.

I'm running an offer if you are interested? Drop me a PM.

Hope that helps.

David.

www.davidhunt-phot.com

Hi Alice.

Your images - 7/10

Your look - 9/10

Best wishes,

Rich.

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SmilesPhoto , Photographer  posted on 23/02/2010 09:15:31   Posted 311 times

Located:UK,Kent, UK
Member Since: 27/03/2009

Thanks so much for your feedback.

Alice xx

I really appreciate your comments!! 9/10 look - woo hoo !!

Kind regards,

Alice xx

Quoting post from aliceburch
I really appreciate your comments!! 9/10 look - woo hoo !!

Kind regards,

Alice xx

60388 is by far and away the best shot of you.  The rest suffer from poor image quality. 
I think you have a good look but need a better portfolio.

Yes I agree, currently getting new pictures so hopefully will have a range of looks, etc.

Thanks for your feedback.

Alice xx